Wow! This photo suits very good in bw! By the way, you got a beautiful face to be caught on photography And to be honest, a great body as well next time you do nude photography, then i will recommend to try a pure white background with no annoying elements around, maybe placing a flash with a gold reflector in a 45 degree angle towards you when the shot is taken if you can't use reflector on a flash, then try to use a lamp with about 150W strenght, but cover it from giving you direct light onto yourself.
I love the Nightwatch series. That aside, the fire looks very fake and photo-edited. Side note: why bother with fire when you managed to take a shot of such a good model with such a great expression. She holds herself well and can carry the picture without special effects.
Well it's because they were for an RPG version of the books so I wanted to have a spell of some kind which is also why it looks so overdone because it's fantacy and I wanted that distinction. Thankyou for the feedback